Revolution of American Independence
 
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Sunderland-Final
6/9/2010 06:50:43 am

Good job. A generally well framed argument. Nice to see different reactions but what of the patriot reaction? Also, connections to theme aren't as tight as they can be, especially around the revolutionary and reform parts. Some pages aren't clearly connected. What is the purpose of the page with just the first paragraph of the DofI? "Background Info" seemes to lack a meaningful unifying idea. Why do I need to know this stuff? Navigation was clear and argument was generally well organized (except few somewhat unconnected pieces mentioned above). It is pretty texty and font is small. Nonetheless, you did a fine job.

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